Rough Cut Improvements

This shot we need to improve the POV (point of view) pace of the the second character by speeding it up and cutting it slightly, in post production.

 






Within this shot we wish to get more shots of the guy stalking/punching the main character. We feel as if this medium shot is to bland and we need more close ups of the other character.

Finally within this shot there is too much head room. To improve on this we want to break this shot up into a series of smaller medium close-ups of everything in sight.